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Cry a tear for me,
And I'll pour you an ocean
Give me an ounce of your love,
And I'll give you my potion
Give me a second,
To give you a lifetime
And you won't run,
From the love that you find
Just a chance,
Is all I ask
To give you my love,
Put it in your grasp
If you take it,
You will find
Unconditional love,
And all that's mine
I won't ask,
You to change what you do
Just give me the chance,
To say "I love you"
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~EmperorHadrian May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is such a beautiful poem. I absolutely adore the message it carries. I also love the comparisons of if you give me this, then I will give you that.
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~extremerebirth1 May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much
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~EmperorHadrian May 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You are very welcome. =)
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=er111a May 8, 2012  Student Photographer
nicely written! :)
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~extremerebirth1 May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thx
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=er111a May 8, 2012  Student Photographer
Welcome!!! :D have you seen my work?
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~rascalscamp May 7, 2012  Hobbyist
It's beautiful. :)
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~extremerebirth1 May 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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~kikiyou-chan May 7, 2012  Student General Artist
omg, i have been feeling this way about a guy but i could never put it into words...thank you for doing that for me <3
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~extremerebirth1 May 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome, and thank you
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