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I know you envy the birds in the air

Flying freely through the sky without a single care

The horses that run, freely through the field

Or the eagles in the sky moving without yield


You're thought you were rooted to the ground, for the rest of your days

No wings to carry you, through the depths of this maze

But before you shed a tear, or even let out a sigh

Put your hand in mine, and together we'll fly


Your legs refuse to move, yet your heart remains beating

Your spirit runs with the wind, though your body remains seating

Your soul spreads out, beyond the sun and moon

Every day your heart grows, like the flowers of June


Your love will take you places, you legs won't let you go

If you ever had doubts about yourself, there's something you know

I didn't settle for you, because you were all that was left

I chose you to be mine, because your far exceeded the rest

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~Zireael07 Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is awesome!
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~extremerebirth1 Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thaks
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~theolivethief14 Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Great poem! I noticed a few errors but really beautiful. :)
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~extremerebirth1 Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Where?
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~theolivethief14 Jun 7, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"You're thought you were rooted to the ground, for the rest of you days"
"though your body remains seating"...not technically incorrect but worded a bit awkwardly =_=" Sorry 4 the criticism
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:iconabcartandme:
You could just do ******* in the description if you don't want to say anything. But then it looks like you're swearing a lot :P Anyway good work, I'm really impressed! :)
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:iconakadawn:
it's so moving! I like this! :heart:
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~extremerebirth1 Jun 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you so much
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:iconakadawn:
you're very welcome! :hug:
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