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Empty and cold inside
Is this all that's left
This narration inside my mind
These thoughts
The ability to have these thought is the only thing keeping me alive

What would it be without them
No pain to think about
Nothing to worry about
I wouldn't need to cry anymore
I'd still be empty, but atleast I wouldn't have to know it

I can't cry anyway
There are no tears left inside
It's like my sorrow is too much to express
But would others cry
What about my parents, my friends, my one true love, would they cry

My parents wouldn't shed a tear
I have to friends to shed tears for me
For me, there exists no one true love
There is no lover to shed a tear for me
I was scared I'd hurt someone, but there is no one to hurt

If there is no one to shed a tear for me, than why should I shed a tear for myself
If there is noithng to lose, whats the point of going on. So many people say, "If you kill yourself, you'll hurt everyone around you." What if there's noone that would give two shits if you died. What would you say to those people.
Here's an idea. BE THERE FOR SOMEONE. Instead of simply calling suicide victims "Selfish", maybe you should be there for somone if you THINK they're suiicidal. There's a lot of people that have no one. Instead of saying, "You'll hurt the people you love" or "Your selfish, think about everyone else" How about you be there for that person, instead of telling them to think about people that may or may not exist.
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belarusian Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Please read my rant about this on my page!!!
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Cherryblossom-24 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I agree with you I wish people wouldn't stereo-type someone cause there suicidal or emo cause they don't know what that feels like.
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thecreepypastastyles Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student Writer
I agree with you. Im emo and suicidal and when people stereotype me and think they know everything about me it just makes it worse
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thecreepypastastyles Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student Writer
I agree with you there. Im emo and suicidal. I hate the stupid stereotype people who think they know how I feel.
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I don't see why we have to understand a persons problems to be there for them. I have no idea what getting shot feels like, but I'm pretty sure I'd feel bad for them.

We should be there for those who suffer, even if we can't relate to why they are suffering
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Cherryblossom-24 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Ya I agree and sometimes when people comit suicide it might be because no one was there for them
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Back n da day, I used to bully people...
Why?
Because I used to bully people, but now it's a little different. I used to be depressed n suicidal. Howevr, if you are, you know how bad it is, and how painful it feels

Please... I don't care if the dude is the weakest little faggot you've ever known, if you don't want to hurt them, don't bully them... no matter how much it is tempting. Because somtimes bullying others is fun and tempting, but still don't do it. it wil make them worse


Sorry if im not making sense. I'm real drunk, so forvive me for being weird.
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Cherryblossom-24 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I understand what ur saying but I've never relly bullied anyone and I'm currently at that state but I couldn't hurt anyone cause that would only be causing someone else more pain and the world needs less pain if that makes sense
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's a lot easier to do when everyone else is doing it.
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Cherryblossom-24 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Makes sense I've seen it happen before but don't get me wrong i think the reason people bullie Is cause there only hurting inside
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Xtremehuntera Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I read some of this stuff every once and stuff like it and actually write some to. My liturature account is Thekillerinyour-room. I have a scene about a girl getting shoot and passing out after to much blood lose. How can I write that shit? never experienced it, and actually not a girl to, have no physco part of me, HOW?!?!?!? CAN SOMEONE FUCKING EXPLAIN?!?!
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well simle,"How can you write that shit?" Well our imagination is the most morbid part of out mind. I'll check your stuff out
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Xtremehuntera Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks smile right? it in well detial to...
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'm a little high... please explain in high people detail. "Thanks smile right?"? what dat mean?
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Xtremehuntera Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You mean't smile right? (little tired there)
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How no, I meant "simple"
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Xtremehuntera Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OK
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Fly-gonz Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
You need some work on your technique.

Your message: "BE THERE FOR SOMEONE" simply doesn't come out in this poem.

I recommend submitting this to your local journal and have an editor provide some feedback. Your English teacher / professor might also provide some hints.
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wasn't really trying to convey that message. The stuff in the discription is stuff I came up with afterwards and is irrelevant
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animallover-13-95 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
This is very relateable due to the fact that this is the thought process of every person who has thought about suicide. When someone feels that no one loves them, they have to realize that even if that is true that no one loves them NOW in the future they will meet people who love them; a spouse, children, friends, ect. To those who are thinking about suicide my advice to you is look to the future not the past or even the here and now.
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well said
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oldartdude Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Is it to kill ones self? or is it to live ones self? Would ones innermost self live? or is ones innermost self LIFE. Tears are part of that life! We cry for someone out there to make us whole. Upon Awakening to the sleep-waiting seed within. And I... I will try so hard to stay awake... so that you will forget your alone-ness when you awaken. Then perhaps you will stay awake for one who now cries alone. Perhaps from your experience you can share your Gnosis of thought... that has learned from pain to THINK WELL AND LIVE EVEN BETTER. I LOVE YOU!
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sleepy-kisses Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
No one should ever be pushed to the point of suicide, regardless of whether someone cares about them or not. You should live for yourself, see past the pain. I've had depression for 5 years and it's so much better now. I wish everyone could see that :/

I love this poem ♥ It really shows the helplessness some people feel, so it's very relatable :)
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thank you
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taoMega20 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it would hurt me, i will say that to any and all suisidal people, and if they think it isnt true, they have another thing coming. i love all of the people on this earth, and i am hurt every time someone tries to take their life.
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wish everyone was that compassionate
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taoMega20 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
it is how i am, if i see anyone getting hurt, i try to help them, even if it hurts me. i even took a knife to the arm for a girl once.
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TopazGemine Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
This, is how I feel most of the time... exactly. Its like you peered into my soul.
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, regardless. The real reason not to kill yourself is for your own good. It doesn't matter if not a soul in the world would miss you. It's the future. Perhaps in 10 years you'd very happy. It's the future you hold out for. Don't worry aobut others.
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amh97 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Even if it doesn't affect people around you, think of yourself. You've got so many years of life left, and you don't even know what will happen.
Trust me, I was suicidal for pretty much all of middle school. But I'm still here, and I can't be more grateful to be alive. So take my advice. Live.
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extremerebirth1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
As a kid. I thought that anyone who commited suicide would go to hell. Regardless if they were thwe best christian in the world.Suicide equals hell. I don't belive that anymore. But I used to feel like I wanted to die. But the fear of hell kept me from it. Now I don't think God would feel that way. I am also perfectly sane now. I don't want to die anymore.Atleast not all the time
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amh97 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
Well, good.
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